Tuesday 1 November 2011

Chrime Teens In, Deadly Revange By.Rachel Jorgensen

Chapter one, Escape

Narrated by, Elizabeth Evans



"Elizabeth come on we are going to be late."
I jumped up and shut down my laptop and slipped on my shoes grabbed my favorite purse, jammed my laptop into it.I was well supposed to be getting ready to go, but I was asked at school today by the hottest guy ever Josh Banks (sigh) to go to prom with him,not that I was deeply in love with him or anything like that.Anyway my answer was yes of course!I dashed down the stairs and well of course had to trip, and at the bottom of the stairs was Sabrina she is my nineteen year old sister we get along most of the time.
We walked out on to the front porch just by the wind I could tell it was going to rain.It had been a really wet summer so I was not surprised when we reached the dentists it had become a tempest.The rain lashed at the car windows the wind was rocking the car back and forth I alighted from my car and as the wind whipped my silky hair all around my face when I saw my two best friends Josh Banks and Mayling Wu, I ran to catch up with them.
"hey," I called
"hi,what are you doing here,"Mayling asked
"don't you remember I told you that I was getting my braces off today after school," I replied
" oh yeah," she said with a frown

We jogged to the sopping wet door where Josh who had gotten ahead was waiting to open the door.As I entered I could have sworn that he had genitally brushed my hand.When I shot a glance at him he just grinned and winked.When our sisters had reached the third floor Mayling and I were already having our braces removed and getting them put on.Josh had just entered the room glanced around and then spotted me he slowly made his way to me.


"Lizzy, will you be my girlfriend?"he asked a pink flush creeping up his Collier.
"yes"I said I seriously thought I was dreaming I have known Josh ever sense Mayling and I joined the C.I.A and that was when we were in the sixth grade and even then I was friends with him.My joyful thought was interrupted by Dr.Smith telling me that my braces were off, I nodded my head in response to her words.I sat in silence as I looked out the rain washed window when lightning flashed and I saw four men alighted from a black sedan.I knew right then and there that we had to get out! I glanced at Mayling and Josh they both had horrified looks on there faces!.......................To be continued

1 comment:

  1. Nice! I enjoyed it but make it more interesting by describing things a little more!:) #44

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