Tuesday 1 November 2011

Trick Or A Treat?

Trudging through the puddles the rain had trailed, I stepped into the radiant porch light.
I stood, examining the blood red door that stood before me.
I rung the doorbell once. The eerie sound echoed in my eardrums.
Instantly, the door stood ajar revealing nothing, but a darkness as black as Dracula's own cape.
A tenuous haze began to journey towards me.
I watched in awe as a figure appeared.
Suddenly a melancholy face blanketed with white emerged from the dark.
I couldn't help but stand with my mouth a gaped and my feet glued on the spot.
I stared in silent horror as he opened his mouth, revealing two brilliantly
sharp teeth.
He sunk his teeth in my throat while I stood paralyzed with fear.
I looked up to the starry night before I fell into my own.

-#421 From the perspective of a trick or treater.

5 comments:

  1. Great word choice! It brought to mind when i was a little kid going trick or treating and a scary house. I enjoyed reading this!-227

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  2. This is amazing! The description is incredible! You are a wonderful writer.:) #425

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  3. I love how this leaves you wondering!#28

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  4. You guys are so kind (: Thanks!
    -# 421

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